Feedback for treatment
The feedback which we received was that we needed to make the institution and convention section better, and we improved these sections by saying why our unique selling point will make viewers more interested in our movie. we also had to make many spelling corrections because we rushed through it the first time.
We were also told to use examples of how other British social realist films made there movies appeal to niche audiences such as including sex and violence, we have also given a twist to ours.
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